I hope you enjoy reading all the poetry I have written over the past few years. I will continue to write more as time passes on.
If you enjoy them please be sure to send them to your friends or like them with the facebook application.
This is a non profit venture as it is mainly to refine my writing style and become better at expressing myself.

Please show others your favorite poems and even feel free to discuss or critique my poetry. It would help me progress with my writing style.

Cheers,
Rob

Thursday, 29 March 2012

Sweat

Sinking downwards into a warm squishy fabric.
The chocolate heats up.
Odours from my body exude onto the exterior.
I take the lid off the trash can.
Every pour in my body leaks liquid.
I feel like there is a heater in my mouth.
I'm quickly filling up my pool.
As a snail once lied to me.
The ones who sit still sweat.
The ones who move work.
We sweat, We work, Then we sweat some more.

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